Um ... OK

Well ok this was a tad odd it seems to be a "LOOP" of a very very short flash no animation at all on this one at all just some images changing around so there can be some work put in here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here with this one it lacked some visuals and more animation so you can add more of that to give it more of a fuller flash feel. So this one seems to have a Repeating Loop and while that may be amusing it tends to just be anoying but you can fix that by adding a Stop Action Code in the flash script, just something to think about. anyways good luck on your flash journey.

~X~

Okay...

I have no clue how this managed to get such a high rating. I guess it's not the worst flash out there, but it's still bad. Do you have a cult following somewhere or something?

It was ok...

...But really needed sound, a proper story and most of all, it needed a proper storyline but for a first attempt it wearn't bad.

For a first attempt...

...that was alright, but maybe you should have sent that to some friends on AIM first, then developed a story line of some kind, and a character other than Richard and I think there was a bird...And add more sound, and not just your voice being recorded into a crappy mic on windows sound recorder sped up like some cartoons.
Just helpful hints :D

Strange But Cool

Good first shot.