Who ever said Newgrounds couldn't be educational? This will be the 2ed education 101 flash i've submitted so i hope this'll help you and your biology problems! This is very basic cell organelle functions and whatnot, so dont expect it to be rocket science.
I don't get why people complain about being educational... as if it was something wrong with it! I thing it was a good idea. The diagrams might need work, but I believe it is quite self explanatory.
If someone never took biology in their lifes, one could learn a thing or 2 while browsing newgrounds.
Thx for the submisson
actually...
the basics info are pretty accurate,
but you made so small mistakes, like phospholipids arme made of a phosphate group and two fatty acids (not lipids)
a lot of typos also...
nice try
Good, but needs details checked
Please sort these out soon- I will show the Dragons and Spirits this Flash when it is sorted!
Plants:
a/an even better why/way
take out the word 'these' nasty- water isn't nasty, only CO2.
Animal:
Table of conents/contents
arnt/aren't
enzymes that that
apparatusand
structues/structures
nuclear enelope/envelope
bilayer/bilayers
overlape/overlap
Much improved on blammed version. I like the voice it is quality naration, but that is the only sound- look for some other sound for something, preferably a little humorous.
Education on NG! Best Wishes- Ice
wtf
WTF IS THIS DOING ON NEWGROUNDS..., this is a rly good flash, bt wtf is it doing on newgrounds, newgrounds is for fighting, shooting, killing, funny stuff, audio portal*, ...\not some fucking cells..jeez
Its ok..
Its shows you what a cell is if you didnt know it but the diagrams arnt very good you shouldve just drew 2d cells because they mightve been better. I didnt learn anything from this but some randomers might and they might apreciate this. But ask this yourself is newgrounds a place for learning about science ?