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Ok then. Definately the worst stick movie I've ever seen. I'm sorry but there was no sound, it was very short, the "storyline" sucked ass, the sticks/animations were great, and you said it was for 17+ cuz of violence. MY ASS!! The only violence in that was some red circle thingy. I've seen Nikelodean shows with more violence than that. Ok, there's the criticism. Now let's make this better.
1. First-off go to (sorry for postin a website but it's only to help this author and authors to come)google and search for A1 free sound effects. A pretty good selection of sound effects. I've recognized a lot of their stuff here on the world famous Newgrounds.
2. A stick movie? CMON!!! As good as the animation was, there are MILLIONS of stick movies out there. Be original like Paper Wars, a stick movie made a while back that is just stunning. Search "stick wars" in the newgrounds engine. It is a stick movie, but is original and well written.
3. Make it longer! Yea sure it takes longer, but the longer the better. And hey, maybe you'll make the front page.
4. Last but not least, make it a bit more realistic. That will really help the animation's quality(obviously).