Not good
Not much to comment on here, you had an idea that could have been summed up by just posting the text of the heading instead of even making this. The joke wasn't that strong, most probably because there was nothing to laugh at, maybe if you used B i would have liked it more. You did add a sound effect which did improve this slightly but still it was missing a whole lot of entertainment, perhaps some more animation for the characters and a background would help.
~H-J~