hmmmm

better than the first one

Just a question.

If your english is bad then why is the english in the game correct?

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I gave that a 5, to save it and i was planning on telling you keep trying, But how in the fuck, Did that get more than 1.5?!?!?! Its at 1.9 right now, how in the fuck....? My flash tutorial is 10x better and its boarderlining 1?

I envy you.

that was....

lame

Your English was fine.

It's everything else that brought this down. To start, this kind of thing has been done plenty of times. The idea of making something like this is to bring something new to the "genre." You had 4 things, being pummeled by rocks, blown up by a grenade, eaten and then shat by a fish, and having a bear or whatever the hell that is being thrown on him. Also, "Bob" looks a bit strange there. When he walks in, it sounds like a tank moving. And are those shoulder caps?

Basically, this could have been much better.