It was rather interesting, I'd love to play the full version. But because of the spelling errors, I'm not rating this five stars. Good job though!
Good demo. I agree with others on the text issue but it's not so far off that you can't figure out what the words are supposed to be, so as far as mechanics go it doesn't detract much. It would be nice if there were more choices sometimes. When there's only one choice it seems unnecessary to make the player click through. Can't wait to see more.
It was really interesting but some of the words were offscrene but it was well made and i cant wait to see the full version.
Great Demo, but a small problem with it
Graphics: 7/10 I understand what you are doing, but the text goes off to the side with some parts, making it difficult to read, and that plain paper texture could use something (maybe designed to look like a book?). I was a little lenient seeing as you may just want to show off the concept and don't care if it looks pretty right now, but seriously, fix that text problem.
Sound and Music: N/A Not enough to judge fairly, in my opinion
Concept: 9/10 Great idea. I hope to see it expanded
Total: 16/20 = 8/10 Solid demo, I hope to see the finished version
hey, still waiting on the full version ;)