Nice flash

I read the description of the movie and noticed it said that you made this in 2004 and it was you're first, so that is great if it was the first movie you ever made. I noticed that the voice acting was a bit poor at times though but it wasn't all that bad at all, and during some parts of the movie the audio was slightly distorted for a second or two. It was good to see that you added a menu at the beggining aswell, its always a good idea if you've got a quite long movie to add a menu screen. I browsed through each chapter and liked most of it. Overall it was a movie with class, each chapter was great and you added some parts which made it that extra bit sweet. Keep up the good work.

good flash but needs some fixing up

-GOOD-
the graphics were good in this flash but could of used more detailing, mabye some shading and some slight radial here and there for some extra touch. the menu was realy nice, not completly nesesary but nice. there was a little humor in this flash also.

-BAD-
well i didn't particluly like the voice acting in this flash, you'r characters didn't realy show any emotions in there voice, also some of the animations were kinda lame like the paper ball throw.

-OVERALL-
great first flash but needs some touching up.

~review request club~

Wow, for a flash that old, it's really something

~The good~

The graphics in this were really well done, especially since this was made two years ago, which is pretty damn impressive. The music you had was pretty subtle in this, which is good because it lets you listen more to the plot, than the actual song, which is how background music is supposed to be. You also had your own style, which gave a very good atmosphere, kind of a dark and thug-like school, which is pretty cool.

~The bad~

Well, the voice-acting wasn't too bad, but sometimes you blew into the mic, and it sounded really bad, and got annoying before the end of the flash. This also could've had more of an in-depth plot, like why "The guy with black sunglasses =P" is trying to attack "The guy with brown hair"? Some names would've also been better as you can connect more with the characters.

Overall, this was a very good flash for your first one, and not to mention this was actually made in 2004. Still, the voice-acting could've been a lot more clear, and this could've had more of a plot. I hope this review was helpful!

3/5
Review Request Club

Pretty Good.

I thought the voice sync and graphics were good. My only real complaint would be that the sound quality of the voices was low. Other than that, a good flash.

[3/5]
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Co-author?

You didn't co-author TomMayCry. I just happen to know him, and remember this animation.