Interesting
~~REVIEW~~
You put good effort into this except it needs to be longer, the plot i like and the art could be better but it was good, keep at it, and put lots more effort you do have a little something that can be much better just needs more effort on your side of things, anyways good luck
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and add more content, some slight detail on the art along with a few effects wouldnt hurt at all
~~OVERALL~~
short and decent flash
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