It was O.K for a first time...
First of all, to those wondering: the song is called, "delusions" by snayk (check on the left).
Back to the review: it was kind of weird, and didn't make that much sense. A guy looks at some water, a duck comes out of nowhere, he opens his eyes, he looked a little better with the eyes closed by the way. The flash is called the dream, you could've done anything...but you decided to do this, which isn't really that bad, just needed to be longer, more thought out, smoother anamation (the hand moving). Anyways, nice first flash, you've got potensial to be a great flash artist, and I hope to see more from you.