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Reviews for "The Dream."

Couldve been better

Ok flash. Few pointers though:

1. Call a flash "the dream" and it could be anything. That means you dont really need a story, dreams are abstract and random.

2. Make it a bit longer, the title was kinda making me think there would be more to this flash.

3. More detail in animation.

Nice work

I like the idea, of this and it had some nice effects and overall a nice style, it was entertaining and i had fun watching it, good style on this, you could lower the file somewhat, but other then that it was decent.

Needs some compression.

~X~

Pretty random, I think

It's well done for the graphics, and music was awesome, but it was pretty random overall. Some guy just turning a tap off.

If you'd add some meaning and story to this, it'd be great to go with the graphics and sound!

Ok.

The music goes good with it at the beginning..but then you mess it up with the girl in the boat? and everything from then on..the girl in the boat also wrecked your color scheme of blue and white...redo and repost back onto newgrounds without that girl on the duckboat...

Did you make the music?

I watched it twice to check the credits but didn't see any reference to who made the music. You did everything else so it seems like you must have done the music as well.

If you did, you should include it in the credits because it was really worked very well in the video. If you didn't, you should mentioned that too (because it's a little dishonest not to).

The way the duck appeared at the end threw it off from the serious feel enough, and in a relevant enough way (water theme) to make it a giggle spot, but it didn't seem like that was intended at a joke so I'm not sure which way to go with that.

Was there more to the dream? It seems like this could get a much higher score if it had either more story (dream-like story is still ok, but not totally random) or if it was a bigger punch line at the end so it could be judged on the merrits of being a quick "oh you got me" sort of flick. - good job, I'd like to see a second version.