g'damn
The drawings in this are 5 year old quality, and I'm not talking about an artistic five year old either, you say in the authors comments that you were 14 when you made this, but it really doesn't look like very much effort or though went into this, and 14 is an age where you should at least be able to draw so don't try to use it as an excuse. if something is good it's good, I've actually seen professional grade flashes from some 13 and 14 year old on this site, and they all put good effort in.