Entertaining

ok so while this is an older one it could use some sprucing up like some stop action code on it, much more content, some backround detail and an idea for your story, other then that the animation was actually not too bad and was ok just needs lots of polish.

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it could use some sprucing up like some stop action code on it, much more content, some backround detail and an idea for your story

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nicely done for your first flash

i know your thinking it probably sucks but this flash is fairly decent for your first. btw is this fbf? but any ways i would recomend adding a preloader (its not hard just search preloader tutorial in the search bar here). my flash software is currently on a different computer and i cant submit any of it sadly. but none of mine is as well animated or as plotless ( lol ) as this (im fairly new to flash as well)

so overall good job!

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as crap as it was, you have a miniscule amount of talent

pah

nothing new here at all.

Like these kind of movies.....

...but this one has serveral missings. The first thing I noticed was that the lines were to thick, make them thinner and some more details on them. Should have been a background music, dunno what. The only reason I dont give this a 1 is that I like these kind of movies.