It started out ok

~~REVIEW~~
This started out ok but was too short you should have put more time and effort into this one, better luck next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more effort longer scenes and much more plot

~~OVERALL~~
A very very short short

~X~

hmmmmm...

make the sequal and then a full review

ok...... *talks slowly*

its random with a hint of out of the box thinking!! i dunno why but i d like to see the other episode!!

lol was kinda cute

but still sucked and needed sound

An interesting idea...

however, this just seems to be a short intro. Make something more expansive and longer...if you even use NG anymore.

TOTW...well deserved.