Has potential...

This was looking pretty good, with the moody black and white graphics (that surprisingly seemed to work for this flash) it worked really well, slap on some nice sounding music, and it's pretty good.
Then, all of a sudden it stopped. Why did it stop? Because it isnt finished!
Truly a shame, it doesnt appear it ever will be finished.

That was OK for a first attempt i suppose

But it was still quite shit. Make sumthin else happen. Like somethin funny perhaps.

umm ok

I think it could be better but nice try

Umm...

wha? 0.o

Not bad for you're first flash

You got good style and a good idea goin on here, just need to expound on the plot a little more. But overall, a good flash.