Not bad
This game wasn't that bad, but it could have been harder. All I did to beat it in 24 days was to continuously drink and then work at the bar. The drinking raised my charm without taking away any energy, and then I could work and make back the money I spent drinking.
So, it's not that bad, but you could make it more realistic. For example, if you drink a lot (at least in my case) you get sleepy and have less energy. So maybe next time make it so that drinking wastes energy too. And also, raising your charm by drinking? Puhlease. Have you ever seen a drunk person? Least charming thing in the world. Good job though.