could-of-been-great

The concept was genius, title has a great ring to it...
Your art was good, nice drawings but somewhat poorly animated... if you were to put alittle more time in it i'm sure you could make it alot smoother...
the story & humor was pretty ok, loved the super hero feel to it, i'm not a big fan of the carebear reference though...
The use of audio sucked...repetitive & anoying... could of used some music.
overal this had the potential to be great but turned out to be so-so.
I'd love to see a remake of this one day.

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I liked the design of your robot it looked so tight, and i saw the little piece of sand falling in the preloader, that kept me somewhat entertained, lol. Make more and more!

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kurbaflaggen

You really need to add music or something along those lines. I found it really hard to pay attention when the only sound was the odd ringing of a bell.

Hm.

This has been on newgrounds for too long..

Good idea.

What an excellent idea! Father time and the reaper teaming up to fight crime! Very cool. Art was great. and the pacing of the story was good..heres what you lose points for though... audio was boring and uninteresting.... also...i thought it was near perfect till the care bears showed up...you already had a great concept, why ruin by some dumb south parkish pop culture reference....lame.