Better gfx would help reel folk in
+++ I liked the use of white brushstrokes on a white bg early on (though you should maybe try using the mask tool).
+++ Liked the basic concept.
--- The transitions between audio segments took too long - I don't think there should have been as much silence as there was.
--- I also felt the visuals were a bit static and there wasn't enough visual interest basically. Specially at the end, where it was just the NG bg scaled.
overall
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Cool idea. Better gfx would help reel folk in though.