Yo! This is my first ever Flash (Don't worry not stick figures). Anyways I was trying to figure out how to use most functions within flash.... Still totally lost but meh. I think this is pretty good. Its all based on a true Story. Hope ya Like it ^.^
PLEASE submit a review, critisism Rocks! Unless you critisize My spelling :( Thats Just plain un-cool :P
((( THIS WAS ENTERTAINING )))
~~REVIEW~~
This seemed to flow very fast, it was neat though i like your detail on the characters and the different view shots and such, the animation was notbad but maybe you should slow it down abit, i wouldnt mind seeing this like in a series and such...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better flow of animation, and slower animation would be nice...
~~OVERALL~~
Funny and amusing, nice characters aswell...
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Looked really good
You have some awesome drawing skills, the characters and backgrounds were all nice and detailed and not sloppy at all.
But when the guys were all in the car they didn't move much... like sure they might have tilted their heads a few times but never and hand movements or body language.
That might just be you trying to hide an animation weakness but if you don't practice it now you'll never improve it later for your best submissions, after all submitting to NG is supposed to give you advice and tips, it's what were here for, yanno? ^_^
So overall the artwork kicked ass and the music was pretty catchy too, but a re-play button is really needed. keep working on that animation and continue to get better... your already way ahead of the average NG flash artist! 4/5. =)
HAH, you got me there, I really do suck at animating :D. I just learned how to make a pre-loader/replay button too, after watching like 50 Tutorials. So hopefully my next 1 will be better. Also thanks for the compliment on my drawings ^_^
This is your first?
Wow, amazing. I actually really liked this submission. I play WoW myself (Great game) and this is pretty funny stuff. Animation wasn't exactly top-notch, but im sure that will improve in your future work. It was all done well, and very funny. Really, Really hope you makw this into a great series!
Great job 4/5 ~Neverending Tragedy
Thanks a bunch. I just hope my animating does get better and you will be pleased with the next entry in the series... I just figured out how to make a pre Loader =D
sorry
i liekd it becyuase it was funny but it sucked sorry but this is a film i must blam......
P.S. i wish my cell phone had a /whisper button
Zomg
First and formost you got My hair style completly wrong, Second Chris voiced my Matt ZOMG.....
Nice Job Jay, besides randalls voice being a little too soft, it was good
P.S need me to be in an flash cartoon ask ill be there
( Guys why are you all dead ?? )
LOL. It was Randalls/vlads Idea to make fun of your Priestiness... I made the film in 3 days and you were never on MSN /sadface... sadly Billies a bad priest too lol. GOOD TIMES!