this is the first episode of a new series of mine...this is kind of abstract right now but when the episodes go by the story will start to unravel
i like nasschew chainsaw
you need to make this into a game, and make it more funny, like have mf doom kill people, like dr. doom did from fanstatic four. then like make it more longer or just flat out make it in a game, and put more underground rap in it. it making that shit and listin to underground.
lol...thats not really mf doom and i might...but i dont like making humorous flashes,no one finds them funny
I Don't get it...Was there a point?
Read the one line summary. I think thats concise enough.
Not Bad, just a few things though
1) Cut the music from the end...unless it has some point later in the story
2)Be a little clearer in the next episode...it was vauge but there seems to be a story brewing.
3)Just work on general approach...graphics, storytelling...try to be a little scarier.
Good Luck!
um
um i dunno.
weres the whole point?
add a storyline dammit!
it was fine
i though it was all right, just not perfect.
work on the endings too please.
i like newgrounds.
i hope you dont get blammed.
if you do, reinvent this or make it longer please, it was pretty good, i'd love a sequel with real action
thanks but it might be a while until you start seeing REAL GOOD action b/c for the first few its gonna be murders without any clue of what happened