Yay
Yay...I helped make this..I thought it was great actually..not bieng biased..but improve the voices a bit..cuz it helps the humour. Other than that Its a step forward for flash at cramzcomix well done steve.
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--Edit-- Fixed the none moving mouth and added credits, Please review
Hello once again good townfolks of Newgrounds!
This is my second submission to NG, the first being the rather unsuccessful "Glory Hunters" but i'll make sure it get's to the front page next time.
This is a comedy flash and my first real flash, saying my first was with sprites. The script was created by Myeself and a member of "Cramzcomixz" called Cloverman.
The flash was really just a test to see if i could lip sync, so tell me if i can!
I hope you enjoy!
That was good!
That was good. Just remove the white bits that are left around the edges of the man. Also when he walks off his mouth is still speaking and is left all on its own on the left side of the stage. Also you could make the text a bit better like making a text effect. Also work on giving your characters gradients. It makes it look way better if you use them properly.
Dont listen to undertaker962
That was boring and I didnt even wach all of it cause I got bored with waching 2 guys just standing in front of a picture.
dont listen to Cal2jack
he is a balm freak and i loved this the mouth at end was funny and ur preloader thigy oo its loaded funny as hell man i loved the plot and the idea was great might not make front page right away maybe later good work
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- Mar 1, 2006
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