Nice
Very cute! :D
Ya know, the boy kinda reminds me of Wolfram from Kyou Kara Maou.
Author Comments
This isn't your typical submission here, so if you come here for an animation with lots of explosions, fighting, ranchy humour, parody/ satire do not waste your time watching this, and don't comment about how I wasted your time. And if you don't like it don't tell me or give me constructive critism. Thanks!
Sorry, needed to get that out of the way. About the animation:
The animation is a little over a minute long animated at a frame rate of 15 frames per second. I've also submitted this to deviantart.
The story is about a little boy that gets an ear ache and starts crying loudly. He's taken to the doctor where he's given drops and a teddy bear. The story was based on my brother, but no he never had a bear stuffed in his mouth to shut him up.
I spent maybe 60 hours on this. And I think it is at least better quality than the first animation I submitted here. I was experimenting with the use of painted backgrounds rather than backgrounds drawn in flash and I think I liked the effect.
I used marcomedia flash mx 2004, Photoshop CS, and Corel painter IX to make this.
Thanks for viewing.
So-so
You couldn't have picked a less interesting story, but you implemented it alright.
dancer4ever responds:
*glare*
Personally I don't have a problem with simple every day sort of stories. I think that if the story is simple it makes it all the more difficult to implement is sucessfully.
Good job
I like this one a lot. Its one of the best non-dialoge flash on newgrounds;
those are usually a bunch of shit that took a few minutes to make. Your hard work really shows, I like the graphics. Keep it up.
dancer4ever responds:
Thanks!
Ambivelent
Was a cute idea, great animation. Just the menu that popped up confused the issue. Took away from the toon.
I dont know what you were trying to say or do with it. You needed to clarify if it was an animator working on a project or it was the child changing his mood or what not.
Could have been a 4/5 only a 3/5 for me because of the menu thing.
Sometimes simplier is better.
Get too fancy and it takes away from the over all toon.
I did see all the hard work you put into it.
dancer4ever responds:
Yeah, the menu was because I as an animator didn't want to have to listen to a recording of myself or a kid screaming over and over and over and over again while I was testing out my animation. Really didn't have any other reason for being there, though I think it would be nice if you could mute kids crying/ screaming.
Thanks for the feedback!
Great flash flic of germans being shot
It's entirely what it must have been like, I can't believe you weren't actually there.
dancer4ever responds:
Huh? You mix up your windows of what you were reviewing? Cause this didn't have any germans being shot. Not even something close.
