Simple but Good

Well planned, decent graphics, decent sound; Its pretty good. You lost me with the plot though. All in all I was entertained, mission accomplished. Go have some cake.

Not bad for a start

It was ok. The story was well thought out and plotted. The sound was good and at the right timing, well done. Maybe you can try putting voices in with a mic or somethin but overall I don't mind watching more of what I've just seen. I can't vote now coz I already did but I promise to give this an average vote. Keep it up and improve! :)

Great jorb

Wow people ather know how to make a good flash or know how to make a way to waste peoples time.....and I think there mite be something inbetween that but...not the point. I thought it was great! "But I dropped a dollar " that was good.

Ehh, not bad, but not great, either...

i like what you were trying to do, but it really needs some refining.
as you said, it was your first, so i didn't expect much. but as ye olde cliche goes: practice, practice, practice!

Pretty cool

Omg annoying sounds fx though =(
but I'm sure you'll improve with each submission.

Good job for first one.