nice
love it, much better than the second one.
I know it didn't make sense when the cop shoot the leaf. the story could be better.
Author Comments
Don´t mind the swedish title "Lönnmördaren". Hm, and I don´t have anything against kids. If anyone would think that. I wanted to do something beutiful, so I made this. I hope you like it.
Frycek responds:
well, I kind of didn't know where to end it. But I'm glad you liked it.
Good graphics, unfortunately the script trashes it
The part where it was just the leaf and scenery was pretty.
But the over all execution of the toon gimped a bit. Pretty much the script.
It was out side the box, different but wasnt really funny because a leaf could really never do that.
Another chap I was helping had the same problem. Good animator but bad script writer. He wanted to do something so off the wall that it became sort of stupid.
You need a bit of "realism" when you do a script. Bugs Bunny is so funny because of the basic plot line. Simple and some what realistic. IE hunter hunting rabbits in the forest. Becomes funny because Bugs fights back.
A leaf would never ever do something like this. I think you should have stayed with the beauty theme, you were trying to combine two things.
Have a squirrel play with the kid or such. Then maybe a pretty sunset.
The leaf fight was alright but then when you went to the police and the scientist it tanked.
Maybe just cut it off at baby getting dunked.
Frycek responds:
Oh, mate...you wrote a long review. To bad it wasn´t positiv. A overall rating: 3?, come on...Realism...well, maybe I try that some time. To short it down? Perhaps, I think that the police-doctor-part, is less great then the rest. But I wanted a ending. It cant just end with the leaf fighting the baby. I hope I´ll do something in your taste some day. Thanks for the comment...
haha!
That was great.. Lol It was so peaceful then Bang! Great twist keep it up
Frycek responds:
Thanks for the vote mate. Yea, I liked the twist. And I'm happy you did to.
Ha!
Great stuff... but what the hell was the leaf attacking for? Whatever. Still damn funny!
Frycek responds:
thanks for the vote mate. I´m happy you enjoyed it.
Nice one
The graphic seemd at some points a bit plastic and as the movie moved on it got slightly worse. But the idea with the kid was touching. :D
Frycek responds:
oh, man....plastic. Well, I guess my style is plastic. :P....thanks for the vote mate
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