I like..
The sketchiness.......its a lot like something I would do!!
Author Comments
This movie was fun to animate, it took me a couple days. I didnt actually start it with a fight in mind, I just drew 2 circles spinning around eachother and added a body to one of them and a hat to the other. I liked how that turned out so I started to animate a fight between the two characters. I just kept thinking what would happen next. Really the cartoon picks up after the two characters are facing eachother and not moving, I started to really begin to animate. This is just a short cartoon, nothing much really. I hope you enjoy it. Also, i really apprieciate people who take the time to write good reviews and suggestions.
lol
I'm just a fan of your work... It somehow relates to me.. so yea good job, if you do make remake it but more detailed and all that blah it would be pretty epic.
Lol at your responses to the other reviewers
ActiveObjectX responds:
i did technically do a remake, it's called " The Detentions Advocate".
My braaaaaain
ouch....there's a ton of these types of "Dude vs. Dude fight" things here at NG....but none of them made me as much dizzy as yours. Perhaps it made sense in your mind...
When the characters bent and twisted in a disproportional manner, made me feel like I was on shrooms or something. It would of been better if you kept with figure proportions and stopped doing the Matrix camera for at least 10 shots.
I did, however, like it when the stick guy threw the hilt of the sword at the other guy. Props for that.
ActiveObjectX responds:
I got props! YES!
Nice flow
The flow of this flash was beautiful! I liked it a lot. The only thing I think it could have used was a bit more detail to the art. Color would have been nice, or at least some shading. In parts of it I couldn't really tell what I was looking at, but all in all I think this flash was pretty cool! Good job.
ActiveObjectX responds:
i remade this cartoon with slightly more detail. I called it 'The Detenions Advocate' go watch it.
oh my goodness...
such magnificence!
ActiveObjectX responds:
this is a magnificent review!