Has potential...

Well, I can't say that it was great flash. When you compare it to some of the others out there, it would be considered sorely lacking. The art reminds me of my bad experiences with Paint, and the lip syncing doesn't work out in some places. On the other hand, considering the fact that you're a beginner and so young to boot, it really wasn't so bad. Keep honing your skills! I'm sure with a lot of hard work and some more experience, you could do much better. The sound was okay, by the way :)

bad..

the graphics sux.. but the sounds was pretty god work more on the animations..

um...

I like the intent of this flash but the story...I had a dream, lets go kick alien ass.... has been way overdone.
The previous reviewer is right human craniums are cylindrical not perfect spheres. the eyes were way too close together(try spacing the eyes out a little more.)
The walk cycle you used is flawed. It looked like they were skipping and the right leg just floated. Pick up the Animators Survival Kit. It's a great book you can get at your local library and is a must for any animator. You show promise just keep working on the basics and you will be alright.

Pretty shitty. Ignore the rhyme.

This was pretty bad. Just a few notes:

-Use detail to show depth; more than one color. That way it doesn't look so 1D and Bitmap-like.

-Use more than one sound effect. You over-used the screaming noise and the squishing effect.

-People don't have round heads.

-When someone expresses emotion, their facial expressions generally tend to change.

not bad..but...

you really need to work on your graphics.....a background wouldnt hurt...and I thought the preloader was pretty cool......so in the next episode...make sure u incluede a background...and that you enhance the graphics.......

so i say you did a good job..