Animation was alright good work needed music tho
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This is really just short n sweet, piece of coursework I've had going for a while but most importantly my first product of Flash (so sorry about the lack of pre-loading thingymajigs etc, still to learn that lot!) nothing hugely fancy, but if you've got any feedback then fire away..
[Update] Ha, ok to answer some questions, yes it was a rotascope, like I say it was a college piece so I was playing around more with storyline and development than focusing on animating from scratch. The sounds are at a minimum as I found it more effective, it gives each individual sound a lot more definition.. similar reasons for the colouring! Thanks for the comments though guys :)
The animation is good...
And could be better, since only the guy that moves...anyway, what I think it could be better was if you add some background music. No need for something loud, just an ambient music, like a little jazz or something. I think it fit's well to the movie style.
Add some music and you get better grades
First attempt is good
Well it isn't my favorite (not close) but it is your first attempt and I feel nice so 8/10 thats good right. I think you need to make something longer and more sound. The funny part was the sign. see you later and hope to review you more in future.
-Yoddtacos
Hah
Very well done for a first. I enjoyed it quite well. Just start focusing on maybe a more detailed cartoon next but for now keep working up your skills with stuff like this.
That was pointless.
For a first it was alright,
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