True...
This flash shows how smoking kills but in a better way of explaining.
I had to do this for a school prject. Took me about 3 days. Its good by school standards, but by Newgrounds standars? Hmmmm, thats why im putting it up, to see how well it does. Very sorry, but it doesnt have a prelaoder! Leave feedback, and vote fairly :P
True...
This flash shows how smoking kills but in a better way of explaining.
Scary
I must say that it was good for what it was, but there are couple of things I'd like to mention. - Need better sounds and music - Try a more interesting background - Perhaps a bit more interesting detail on the machines and such, mostly just lines and single coloured blocks - Like the voice at the end, was that your own, James?
Hehehe...indeed it was....
Good.
Haha. Way to go.
I love how theres a whole chian of events that lead of to the destruction of the lungs, heart and then the guy himself.
Keep up the good work.
thank-you
i loved this, thank you for putting the message through that smoking kills. my grandad died because of smoking and this is a good way of getting the message through
THANK YOU!!!
Thank you for watching it, and voting. Im sorry to hear that your grandad dies from smoking :(
Good
A strong message, well done with this, it was quite creative and original =)