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Muriel.

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Set on a dark night in the British countryside, the deal's off and the guns are out. Anything could happen....

I started work on this animation some time in early 2005, and have left it, returned to it, and finally completed it this half-term break. My first real NG submission, and a lot of hard work has gone into it, enjoy, and rate fairly!

Jack.

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Great!

Lots of action, lots of intense music, lots of variation, great speech, smooth animation. Really is an animation I enjoyed watching. one of the few things you should improve though is to make the lines a bit thicker, smoother, add shading etc. Otherwise it's a great great start, keep up the good work!

-cd-


Jzoid responds:

Thanks!


Good one!!

Dude, I gotta say, I envy you. I'm a flash beginner as well, and my stuff sux compared to yours. Excellent animation. Keep it up. DONT BLAM THIS!!! 4/5!

SharkFin_Maniac


Jzoid responds:

Thanks SharkFin. I have had flash for a few years now and always played around with, but just never completed an animation for submission. Im just glad i finished it! Thanks for your vote :D


Eh, nice start doc

Pretty decent for someone who is new to flash animation. If I were you, I'd take this, and spend more time on it...Test new graphics, get better sound. Some of the best things in life start from the first projects.

If you think yours is bad, check out a submission entitled "Section 1-36"....God that made me want to vomit.


Jzoid responds:

Thanks for the advice. I'm back at school tomorrow, but when i have some more spare time i think i will go back to it. :p


Not original at all.

The voices sounded like they were made for something else.
I've seen so many of these that it just was horrible.
You really need to work on your graphics.



Creative twist

Rather interesting twist. Assassin without a clear motive streaks through the movie killing people and suddenly at his final target Muriel, the conventional character, steps in. Nice idea, though not really a clincher to make people want to see it.


Jzoid responds:

Hmm the twist even surprised me a little!

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Feb 18, 2006
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