Interesting Concept.

The concept is neat, although i think another name for Psyche diving would be best, put some creativity into making a name for it, but as i said i think the concept of entering some ones mind is neat. And i look forward to seeing more from you ;p just work on your art skills alittle more.

Text Mistake

It seems like a good movie, but I would fix the text, make a few animation fix-ups, and re-submit

u gotta fix it.

it seems good but not all of the text fits on the skreen.

Author continus to resubmit entry

Author continues to resubmit entry

Whistle blown

worse than ever

As the series progresses, the old unique style is lost (or was it simply incoherence on the part of the animator) as the story becomes more obviously a juvenille sci-fi "save the world" tale of teen fantasy. Characteristic anime elements degrade the older graphics style, muddling it up. Now its pretty much like a really bad anime with no vocals, crude animation, and crap sound.

I would suggest you go back and look at what made your earlier flash work special: the elements of intrigue, not talking down to the audience, character study instead of sci-fi sparkle, a unique fragmentary graphics style. You are going in the wrong direction, and soon will be indistiguishable from the pablum of other insipid young flash-meisters.