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Purty Fly for a White guy

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watch it, its all good, go easy on the rateing.

I fixed the sound problem so it more sync now

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Blammed (with good reason)

You could do better than this. I thought this flash had too much ambition for the author's ability.

Make something more entertaining, and submit it.

dude u totally stole my idea....

but u did a better job than i woulda hoped to.... just work on the ending!

hhmmmm......

its ok its good even but you kinda fucked up at the end

ALLLLL-RIGHT THEN

OKAY
first off it was pretty good
you had a good idea when making this and i respect that, but man
the lip syncing got a bit off near the end
also as one of the earlier posts said, Dont speed up the godamn song
thats like peeing in the holy water, you only do it if its supposed to be funny
anyway
it was alright
Good luck in the future!

It's the little things.

You certainly spent quite a bit of time on this, but you overlooked some obvious things which could've made this flash great. Obviously the lack of sync at the end is hurting you in the previous reviews, but that's not the only thing.
The speeding up of the song was a big mistake. If you're gonna do a song-based flash, but you find that the song is too long for your abilities, pick another song! It's not worth annoying the viewer with distorted audio.
Lastly, get your lyrics from a credible source like, I don't know say, The Offspring? Lyrics websites tend to be innacurate, and it shows when you flash things like, "Don't debate - play it straight" when the actual lyrics are, "Don't debate a player-straight." The Offspring is one of those bands that posts the official lyrics of each song in the CD booklet. Take advantage of that!.
As has already been said, take this back; fix the problems; and resubmit - you'll get much higher scores.

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2,854
Votes
14
Score
2.53 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 18, 2006
2:23 AM EST