Hmmmm
Not to be a jerk, but you need to work on your art before making animations. for people to see that is. I'd never release anything with art this bad.
Sorry.
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Well, this is one of my first animations, second to be exact. It was for a end of the semester project. I got perfect on it and a couple of my friends told me to sumit it, so here it is. It's about a man who is killed then bron as a vampire, he then finds out who killed him why and gets his revenge. There is a lot out of the film due to the time restrictions on the project but if people like this then I'll be glad to finish it.
potential
i see potential here. just keep going and you'll get great
Somewat good
this is quality flash, it really is. the only problem is the amination. if this had good anamation, itd be close to an 8 or 9 on the scoreboard.
Mask-of-Sanity responds:
Thanks, i'll work on the animation on my spare time to try and make it better.
mmm, fair story
not exactly original. the voice acting was decent, but the animation was rather sloppy. keep trying.
im with the last reviewer...
you can use flash - thats a start - and its all well and good that you got such a great mark on it really it is. but it is kinda un-original and the artwork isnt the best in my personal opinion. work on shadows and textures - overpowers the need to develop genral artistic flare
Mask-of-Sanity responds:
Thanks, i'll work on it.
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