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I think that that the text should be really improved. I know it is popular to have it be a little of center and funny, but it looks fairly bad. I like the concept of the movie... Having a tree decide whether or not to play golf with a puppy. It's interesting. The file size is small enough for me to wonder how you had fit the song at the end in, but it's a good thing. I think the artwork some some additional work as well, the tree itself looks adequate, but could be better. Also, the puppy needs some work as well.

Ryan

Not the best, but...

Not a bad entry for Corpsegrinder's contest either. It could be improved.

I liked how you drew the dog. It looked like a complete doofus and I'd have the urge to beat it too. The subtitles were funny to look at, with all the mistakes that seem to tell how twisted Tree is in his brain. The hole-in-one joke was well thought and pretty original.

My only complaint, overall, is the ending music. WHY, OH WHY, DID YOU HAVE TO BRING THOSE ANNOYING RODENTS BACK FROM THEIR GRAVES? WAAUGH!!!

Oh well. Be a good Clock and make more people happy with your wonderful Flash movies.

Shame on you

I really do hope that you can do better then this. I voted a '0' because it is very poorly animated, the sound quality is quite poor, and the plot is stupid.

Hole in one

But that dosn't change my vote.
Graphics- Not so great, try harder.
Story- Nothing special, just a tree with a clock that likes to beat puppies.
Sound- Still nothing special, just some old guy that sounds like he likes to abuse children.
Violence- Hole in one!
Interactivity- None at all, besides clicking the play button.
Humor- None.

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~Chanceler~

Good.

I'm not sure what exactly this whole puppy abuse thing is with the CC today, but so far it hasn't been the CC's best themed movie series, however, this is one of the better ones I have seen. The graphics were pretty decent, nice subtitles. The sound was also well done, nice use of speakonia and wonderful sound effects. I liked how the puppy fell in the hole, it looked weird but it made me chuckle. I got a few small smiles out of this flash, but it's nothing that special.