Good job
That was done well for your first time, I'm still learning more about flash as well. You should've made it longer though and I thought the characters needed to do more instead of just stand there and talk.
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K ive never used flash for this stuff before! i know how flash works or atleast the basics of it but this was just something i did cos i was bored. After i finished i realised that it has pottential so im submitting it to see what you guys think. Just want your advice ladz n ladys tell me what to do!
Lol i love it!
At the end that was awsome
I say you make more noobz things of things like this one...ths might be your calling!
D3X responds:
Lol well thats true. No matter what game you play. Where you go or what you do there will always be a noob... and they will always be funny. For example... Picking on the new guy at work. now thats a laugh lol specially if hes a tard n when you talking about online gaming well theres so much pottential in that for a cheap laugh. Well ill make the next one see how that goes i think. If that goes well i might just stick at it untill i can use flash to do real animations. Thats my goal!
Short
To Short
D3X responds:
ye ok. ill make the next one longer.
Lol
:)
Thanks for the chukle bro :)
It was good for a beta (if it is a beta) :)
You should deffently make it longer, add more stuff (funny stuff)
You should add an end, and maybe a play again button, so it's not like just sitting there playing the musc loop over and over :)
Anything else... i dont know :)
But you've got one thing that gets you +1 point from me :) the fact that you voice covered it :) and not just computer generated it :)
That is very very VERY good keep it up :)
All in all i thought it was good for such a short movie :) keep at it you AND it has potential :)
Cyaz
DarkAngel out...
D3X responds:
Cheers man seriously. This is osme advice that i will use. Yeah it was a beta i didnt know how it would turn out on ng so i didnt wanna waste weeks on something that was gonna get blammed. Thx again!
What just happened there?
I was expecting online words to be used (e.g. pwned or own3d) but then I saw this. Didnt think much of the beginning but the end was what made me laugh. Should've had a plasma grenade stuck to him though.
D3X responds:
nothing it was pointless.
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