there wasn't really a beginning or end
good animation but it's not really long enough to know what's going on. please expound
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Not much to say really ^^ I did it all in one day :D but took me bout 3 days to figure out how to add music, certain animations and cropping the pictures to make it look nice ^^ yus I'm lazy.
Mascara is my brothers character and Wendy is my sisters character ;P you can find them in my page somewhere X3
SallyTheRabbit responds:
Well it was a dedication to an idea my sister wendy had (the purple animal in the flash) it's pretty short cuz i wasn't sure how to drag on the fight, basically the world is full of magic and stuff like that and mascara (the bat character X3 is always evil, so I had her getting beat up :P
I liked how it was drawn..
But it would be much better if it was smoother, I made a crappy flash where Santa crashed into a house and died (was about 5 frames long) and it suxxored no sound.. so this pwns that... Good Flash ^_^
SallyTheRabbit responds:
X3 hopefully my future flashes will be better X3 I've just been figuring out more ways to use it, so yea X3 maybe the next one (im currently working on) will be more impressive X3)
korn is awsome
sweet music ... an nice graphics could been a little long ....
SallyTheRabbit responds:
yea ^^ I didn't have enough inspiration or ideas to make it any longer :P and thank you for the comment ^^
Your discription is really underselling you.
First off, I have to disagree with your choice of 'Got The Life' as the soundtrack. It really doesn't fit the artistic style of this flash. Plus after 7 years I'm really tired of hearing that song. I mean homicidal tired.
On the positive, the Sonic-esque art style is very nice. Neat lines and bright colors. And surprizingly well animated for an admitted first effort. While whatever happens between Girl Fox A and Girl Fox B is all but a mystery at the end, it really didn't matter to me. If you can make a full length flash movie as well animated as this, then I totally would want to see it. Good work!
SallyTheRabbit responds:
thank you for your critique! ^_^ I only chose that song because sadly I found it was the only song that suited the fast beat animation ;P hopefully my next flash will be far better without the depressing music ^^
Ok, So what just happened?
That didn't make any sense at all. It was short, confusing, lacked sound, had no plot, and was about animals. The graphics were ok, but maybe a prelude or something as to why sally is being attacked or burned or whatever actually happened. Sound would be a plus. I wasn't keen on the music but that's me. Keep trying.
SallyTheRabbit responds:
The characters in the flash are Wendy (my sister) and mascara (the bat chick) the main reason for it being so short was I lacked huge ammount of inspiration and training in this sort of thing ^^ luckily I've found out heaps more about flash and my next one should be far more presentable.
but thank you for your critique ^^ it really helps with ideas of how I can excel in my flash making ^^