Okay

I said it on the other submission, you have the potential to be a good singer. Keep practicing. If you can, try to move the sound so that it feels like it's coming out of the top of your head. It's a little difficult to give voice lessons over something like this, but that's the best advice I can give you. To help with keeping your tone, try warming up with fourths. Sing one note, then go a fourth down, then go back to the original note, then take it down a half-step, and sing down a fourth from that, and so on. You may need to practice with a piano at first, and if you just talk to the music teacher at school, they might let you use the piano, when it's not already in use.

Keep practicing. In this video, the music was a bit loud, and it did drown out your voice. Turn up your mic just a bit, and it should help. I'm not much of an artist, so I can't give you any advice there, but as a singer, I can suggest help with that. Good luck.

Hate to break it to you but...

You can't sing... sorry.

a valient effort

i'm sure a lot of time went into this music video of sorts so i won't trash talk it. however the music was only okay. the singer couldn't hold some of his notes w/o sounding bad and the animations could use some shading or more time spent drawing them. your music isn't bad (i heard the other song you sent to this site) but you need to come up with slightly more complex riffs to keep your songs from becoming dull or annoying. keep practicing :)

Interesting - like Joy Division on beer and prozac

Hmm. Nice video, thought the claymation was good, and some of the animation was quite smart - like the falling teardrop bit. Sound quality wasn't great, and the singers voice is a bit odd, the guitars a bit plinky plonky. Sort of like Joy Divison, but more upbeat and less precise.

Impressive for your second flash

the anomation was decient (better that most peoples second attempts) and it flowed well. I realy liked teh claymation cuts, you did a good job with that. The sound was a little muddled together and soft so I had trouble hearing the lyrics or distinguashing(definatly spelled wrong, sorry) the insterments. It turned out well though, good job one this one. Hope to see more flashes in the future.