Good for firsts!

This is pretty good for a first flash, the graphics weren't poorly drawn, and the music was alright.

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok for a short random little movie. I say that the graphics were well done. Lots of shading was used in this movie, and all shading was consistent with a light source at one spot. Not bad animations and some cool effects in the radio and dance animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
People today want storyline and meaning in a movie, not just random dancing animation, which is why this has such a low score. Random stuff usually doesn't do too good.

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Hey...I'll give you credit. At least you had some style in the artwork. This by no means Newgrounds material, but since it's on here for some kind of approval, I will say that your artwork is pretty clean, smooth and colourful. You have potential as an animator, but you need some great ideas to apply your talent to!!

Wtf?

Its short, the music sucks, the guy looks like he has down syndrome, and its just stupid.

Are you actually trying to get this on newgrounds?

Nice effort, too short.

I like the animation (nice and smooth) however it was way too short if i blinked i could've missed it. It was your first submission however and it was a good effort. Just try and make it longer next time :D