AHAHAH!!

Man, I did better flash when I was 10 years old and all I had to work with was flipbooks! however, I see some definite potential. dont use circles for the arms and legs, make it interactive, and make it longer.

Suggestion

Group together with an artist. your idea is good but the art is real bad, which hurts it.

Well presented...technically deficient,,,

I have to say I like your cinematic vision. You directed this short piece very well, although I would have preferred just a little more in terms of story. The music was nice, but the piece didn't seem to flow with the music or vice versa. The background graphics were awesome, better than even most of the top quality flash movies. But the character models and animation really stop this from being any better.

NIce music

Graphs were a little off, but themusic was awesome.

you did pretty good with a mouse

if you can draw, it would be worth investing in a stylus or the illustrator program. either of these can make a world of difference