I liked the story that you put into it. Im assuming these are characters from another Final fantasy? Well, I thought it was very good.
It seemed obvious English is your second language, which actually made the movie more appealing! Always love FF6 sprites, so that's a bonus point.
first of all , there is no story in it .
second i wont give you a 4 cause your grammar is bad,
not at al the only thing is you should put things in like
-humor (dont have to but you could try)
still , i will give you a 4 cause i see your new
thats why you should see this as a 6.
grts and gl with ur next one!
needs a little work
Overall this is a good start. There were a few small grammatical errors, but the message was still clear. You should expand the fight scene a little to give the story some much needed carnage, as well as to expand the play time. Like i said, good start that just needs a little more work put into it to make it a truly good flash.
You missed a key feature:
Add that to a button, and it should work. It will allow a person to move on with the dialog. Good job, otherwise!