Very interesting
I liked the story that you put into it. Im assuming these are characters from another Final fantasy? Well, I thought it was very good.
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Hey guys,thank for the hint you give me.Sorry about the bad english,i will try to correct it.This is the second movie of FF:REMIX,i not so sure about the action scene good or bad,hope you like it and please vote fairly.
Amusing.
It seemed obvious English is your second language, which actually made the movie more appealing! Always love FF6 sprites, so that's a bonus point.
Mhoah..
first of all , there is no story in it .
second i wont give you a 4 cause your grammar is bad,
not at al the only thing is you should put things in like
-background music
-Story
-humor (dont have to but you could try)
still , i will give you a 4 cause i see your new
thats why you should see this as a 6.
grts and gl with ur next one!
needs a little work
Overall this is a good start. There were a few small grammatical errors, but the message was still clear. You should expand the fight scene a little to give the story some much needed carnage, as well as to expand the play time. Like i said, good start that just needs a little more work put into it to make it a truly good flash.
You missed a key feature:
on(release)
gotoandplay("nextframe")
;
Add that to a button, and it should work. It will allow a person to move on with the dialog. Good job, otherwise!