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hey men you animetion is cool, you are animeting and verey cool. sorry my english not is verey good
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Ok everone, I know this is already on Newgrounds, but I have made a new account on the the sole reasone my other one is glitched and it is unnusable
As for this, I made this years ago, but I finally got episode 2 done, wich you can aquire from the flash, it has a link on the menu to it
If you don't get whats going on or you just don;t want to watch 2 because of it's size, numb. three will sum up one and 2, but it will not end the sries, I plan this ot gradually get better and better everytime and explain a detailed story, so enjoy the crap episodes for now
hard to vote/review score!
Its kind of really good and fairly basic at the same time- isn't it?
+art good
animation mostly basic
storyline intriguing to a point but this was hardly what one would call an episode it was so short, its not much more than a teaser/alpha.
I hope you will go back and update this one when you have developed your series as this will let the others down in due course if you don't. While you are at it, get someone to go through the english, its not too bad but the series deserves better and to someone who is good at it, its easy enough.
I know my score is not very encouraging, but we get so many stories about how some series is GOING to be so good and this episode really isn't much yet.
Please put full music credits in the sub. The end credits song is cool- I would like it set to play through to the end, maybe with some little animated loop or preview or something.
Nice production pics- your hands are fine, its anime not Michaelangelo!
Scene Select looks silly when there are only two tiny scenes! It put your Interact up, but your style down!
You have a lot of potential. When I have time I will explore more of your work.
Best Wishes,
Ice
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not 2 bad, it was quite cool, didnt quite get the ending, but you will proberbly explain that in the next episode
woa
did albert einstien really say that?
well great job on this, what was your other accounts alias?
Not bad.
Odd i thought i already reviewsd this when i said not to blam it? ohwell.
Good job and i can't wait till number 3. Good luck.
New fan~Ellias
