i gave ya a 4
... the still images of your work were great... though i found the actual animation aspects of this flash to be weak.
i also agree with the previous review... very sin city like... me likey long time. :D good job for a trailer
Author Comments
this is a trailer for my big 3 part project im working on for my college animation coarse....im sorry there's not alot of animation due to only 1 month of animating......but it was all planned out over 3 months in all....storyboarded and design concepts put in place....so expect lots more animated scene's for first episode...(July 2006)....
This is my second flash film....
I hope ppl enjoy this.....thanks for listening
good
I like the style alot, it reminded me of Sin City. I liked it. The only complaint I have is at times things didn't look as good as others. Some animations and characters looked beatiful, and then at another scene, they look kinda inconsistent. But thats it, good job.
wasnt that basically the matrix...
umm, very matrix like, agents, computers, guns, THREE agents, man in trenchcoat, spaceship flying around, police sirens.. very matrixy indeed...
Sythes-of-Death responds:
If thats what you see the matrix as then your film knowlege is very narrow minded...you think the matrix was the very first film to ever use space ships.....computers???.....or even a certain type of clothing.....???
Your very wrong indeed...
But thanks for the vote none the less...
This can be very good, if you practise more.
Really cool flash and all, but isn't it a little too much Matrix when those agents pops up? And i think your "company" Sythes is meant to be Scythes...
Sythes-of-Death responds:
hardly....i mean agents is one of the only things that make this series anything to do with matrix......i can assure you my story is nothing to do with the matrix...
LOOOL....i get asked this alot...well u see thier is already a "SCYTHES OF DEATH"....and so i dont wanna get sued so i just cut the C in order to avoid copyright.It's a long story...hahaha
anyways thanks for the vote... =p
I liked it.
A couple things you could improve on, if you just spent some extra time on them, are 1. animation and 2. hands.
Sythes-of-Death responds:
huh.....you dont think i draw hands well???......ok but if i did that i would never get anything done so no.......but as i have said before i will rework alot of the animation for this and the first part will be 5 min long....
plus i will have like 6 months to work on it all so no worries...^^'
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4.05 / 5.00
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