lol
that was nice i thought it was funny this will definetly make it through with a 3. average i think
Author Comments
As a whole I'm not very satisfied with the flash. I would work on it more to make it flow nicly and maybe extend a few scences but my flash porgram got deleted. So here it is, enjoy.
Drunkenhispanic responds:
You were right on the money. Glad you enjoyed it.
hhmmm
this is gonna survive...yet its not the best thing ive seen hitting the portal...but you can at least draw
Drunkenhispanic responds:
I'll take that in a good light. Thanks. Sorta...
XD
Very funny man, you should make more chapters
Drunkenhispanic responds:
There was going to be more. They were funny too. But I ran out of time, effort, and lost the program to make it.
Good...just not great
I like the style in this piece and the fact that there is an actual sense of direction and good writing. Indeed, if it weren't for the quality of the visuals and the substandard sound quality, this would easily earn a nine or a ten. But while there's substance and style, the technical components bring it down. Last of all, please cut off the music at the end of the Flash file. Still, this is good work. Now do better!
Drunkenhispanic responds:
Thanks for the meaningful review. And I totally agree. If I could make myself not be lazy and do some work. I could proably make a very well drawn flash. As for sound. I have a limited source and even more limited understanding on how to control it.
Great review of society
I thouroughly enjoyed your view of society and the use of sympathy for the devil the only stones song I still enjoy after they went pretty much pop
Drunkenhispanic responds:
Well I'm glad you found meaning in the flash; because I didn't put it there. And yes, the song kicks ass.