Damned good, creepy, very atmospheric for as spare as it was.
Only problem? it's only a preview. you need to release more of it.
Same's true with your stuff in general. youv'e only relased this and lust, and both were excellent. really want to see more of your stuff.
a small pin prick..
from when i first saw ur idea I liked it. the style is very unique in the fact you dont see it at all anymore, very daunting atmosphere also. The full animation is definately needed and anyone who hasnt seen it should, I deserved the 'A' in class and thats my honesty..
The art was good, the style was good, the sound was okay.
...also, you have the same name as my brother.
it was good
When you make the complete version, it'll be even better.
Hey man the full version is up its just to big to put on here, there are 2 links in my comment.
The one in the humor is if you like tortured baby things...moving on. These are some cool shadowy effects, looks like it'll be a good flash. Best of luck to you sir.