Meh

Pretty crap.

ooook then...

it could happen.....................................................
.......midal skool progect ehy? yey tey toopid bhut tey tech u hhow 2 speel...stey ine et.....

Skill

Work on the flash graphics then come up with better lines then get a better story or don't even worry about doing the next movie

no comment

Nice start but then there is nothing to say. You must focus on your flash skill and maybe than next time with relatively nice subject like this you may enter the portal

omg could that have been more annoying?

next time your going to use annoying sounds for the background... instead of looping them in an annoying way. get audacity and make it one long stream. and that beeping was really annoying!

you took 20 seconds to move a stupid ship.

the only good part is the opening line.

this is based on events that may happen in the future.

other then that... what about the bloody voices! they werent' even voices they were computers... and the lip syncing wheres the lipsyncing!

www . keyframer . com

this is an awesome site with some mad tutorials down the bottom left of the page. they teach character movement and lipsyncing and 2 and half d animation.

next time if you cant sit through a part of it over and over and over without saying this is really shitting me. dont put it in.

good luck!