Uncertain about this

I honestly have no idea what this is all about, but there are some major issues you should do something about:

First off, I can't follow the story at all. I have no idea what's going on at any time in this flash.

Secondly, the audio is WAY too unbalanced, and so god damn loud at times, I had to turn down the sound levels because it hurt badly. You should do something with the encoding of it.

Also, there seems to be a typo at the end. The title screen drags out a bit too much, and the graphics are... well, they're okay, but no better. Animations seem very unreal and sloppily done.

Cheers
KAG

lol,

the only reason i gave it a 10 in sound is because i love "paint it black" by the rolling stones other than that its pretty tretarded, and thats why i liked it

Very bad move

It has no point or plaot and the graphics are horrible

has no detail to it

try better next time,its really pointless

hmm

This was weird, the music really drove this piece, but I dunno, seemed too random and pointless. Teddy's decision, decision to do what? To be continued, but there is no continuation.