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Trials of Time eps 1!

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EDIT: whoa..buggy..somequick fixes..sorry >.<


Ok, the prologue initially had this shadow guy from ff something i think, however, i've ditched him because frankly, naruto has much better sprites. Not all of which I have used yet. Please review with helpful comments..this took a while so be gentle...The story of the prologue still counts! so watch it if you want.

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Well, Ehem.

Nice work, I would expect this from Work from Deekman, his sprites work very great, and Naruto and Fire Emblem don't mix so well, but you would never expect that, so I clap for you.
Let me review..
GRAPHICS: Deekman's Sprites, which (no offense) appear to often and I am TIRED of it, so I dont really like it that much, but I always have loved Fire Emblem, so you just saved yourself... Lol.
STYLE: Nice work, but it kinda gets a little stale, I can't really explain. But it is pretty good.
SOUND: Now, this would be MUCH better if it wasn't for that stupid Bird in the beginning, and Loops for Music. It gets annoying, Y'know?
VIOLENCE: If this had no violence, would I watch it? Anyway, it had a well ammount of violence and blood, so I gave it a 9.
INTERACTIVITY: A play button, and a Replay button, good enough for me.
HUMOR: Is this supposed to be funny? Sorry, if it was I didn't see anything.
OVERALL: 83 / 100 Nice work, but there are a few things that need changing.
RANK: Lv. 32 / 50 EXP: 1253 / 1255 - Skillful Killer (Skillful Flash Artist, heading for the "Next Level".)
*NEW FEATURE TO MY SCORING SYSTEM, RANK*

not to great

did you creat anything in there but you the animation?

Cookierabbit responds:

Weeeelll, some of the sprites didnt have exemplar animations (on the sheet) so I did have to make around, 4 or 5 frames of sprites in total, does that count?

Meh, nothing I haven't seen before.

Graphics were all sprites, no points there, doubt you created any of your own graphics. Style, don't even get my started. Mispelt words, boring story, the characters barely got anywhere, and it's all been done before. Sound sucked hard, that repeating jungle clip had a big gap each time around, and I think that was pretty much the only sound in the movie. Of course there was a bunch of violence, although it was all pretty stale. I was going to give you an 8 but I just realized the way the violence was done was boring, you get a 5. Interactivity=the standard buttons. Humor, none. Overall a 5.

Cookierabbit responds:

well, not really much in my ability besides standard buttons, not sure if scene selection would really count. Whats wrong with the story? its a series so the story has to pik up a bit :D :D with some sprites I had to make a couple from the ones already their, wasn't that much but I was forced to :P sorry about the sound, fixing it and resubmiting it

Good job

Good job, I liked the story...getting kind of rare to find a flash with a plot lately. I'd just recommend getting the sound to flow better w/o any breaks and fixing a few spelling errors. Keep up the good work!

Cookierabbit responds:

thanks, check it out again later on, im going to (or already have) fix the loops and misspellings (hehehe)

YAY! 5!!!

gave ya a five for FIRE EMBLEM!!!! I AM IN LOVE WITH THE GENERALS ARMOR!!!you know what i mean...

Cookierabbit responds:

lol, ya he looks mighty cool :P

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