wow he was actually sliding.
I know you may not be a pro at motions but you obviousely spent a lot of time in thinking up the story and recording the audio. So you could have tried to make the guys walk. i admit you got a nice clean character style. You can realy bring that to life with more secondary motions, such as breathing or legs moving. You ca ntell a story no doubt, but let the story tell itself with the animations. Keep up the hard work. I look forward to more stuff of these guys.