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PLEASE LEAVE ME A REVIEW ON HOW CAN I BETTER MY ANIMATION PLEASE LEAVE ME HELPFUL INFORMATION THANK YOU.

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ugh....

one tip.... make it funny. funny is good.

Why did i rate this 2 again

Ok heres some helpful info on how to improve this:

1. Make the animation actually have a point, message or plot or at least make it funny
2. Make it so that we actually understand what that retarded kid is saying
3. And other shit but im too lazy to think of. Just use common sense damnit and make a good animation next time.

How can you NOT improve?

Ok, seriously, how can you NOT improve on this flash?

The drawing is horrible - it looks like a 7 year old drew it.

The animation - bland, nothing much to it.

The plot - There IS NO plot. Make some sense... this is crap.

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CAPS LOCK IS AUTO PILOT FOR COOL.

Ugh...

For the love of god, what was the whole point of posting this degraded pile of BS?! I don't usually leave a review this harmful, but that was too stupid for me to be merciful.

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2,529
Faves:
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Votes
20
Score
3.00 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 7, 2006
11:27 PM EST