Woah.
That was a good poem! And it had Shadow. The only thing is you might want to use a smaller brush size on a few of the pictures. Other than that it was really good! I definately couldn't have written a poem that good.
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Please take time on looking around the options other than just Play Movie. Yes I know, there is only one song, but it's the only one I find that fits. I hope you guys like it. by the way, it is not meant to be that funny, it's meant to be serious, so I hope you vote it as a serious poem.
Good
Well, I'm not really into Poems other than some War ones. I didn't like the fact you used Shadow as the character of that poem, could've been great, but no, instead it was good. I still gave you a 5 man, everything was good except Shadow.
ChazmtheHedgehog responds:
Well, the point is that Shadow is the one who lost Maria. Anyway, thank you for reviewing.
That was good!
Finally another Sonic fan who knows Shadow is a hero! Just the music did fit in but I didn't really like it. You should've added more to it also! It was really good though and had a good point to it!
ChazmtheHedgehog responds:
Wow, thank you! Yes, Shadow is a slightly messed up and misinterprited guy, but hey, he's a hero! I started to add a bit more, but it was sloppy, so I chopped it off.
That was a nice symphonic poem.
You are right. Poor Shadow, loosing his best friend must be really painfull for him. You still have to work on your text but I was still able to make them all out. I loved it!
ChazmtheHedgehog responds:
Yeah, my text is a little messy, but I'll work on it. Thank you so much! I think that losing Maria caused so much pain on the little black hedgehog.
wow
wow i love that poem dude did u write that?!?! wow that was good
ChazmtheHedgehog responds:
Yes, I wrote it. Thanks. That means a lot to me that you liked it.
