Started Slow, but finished strong

For the first bit of the flash I'll admit I was rather bored. Your spelling and grammar needs work, trust me it is essential.

The comedy value wasn't bad, in fact it was rather original but you need to work on the timing and making the dialogue more presentable. If you fix this up your jokes would be funnier.

I will say I was impressed with the length of the film. It's not often you see one that lasts that long, and I'm sure you had to have put a lot of effort into all that length.

Overall I was satisfied with the film, and I loved the scene with the Red Mage. Keep up the good work!

Well done :)

I think you did incredibly well; i know how hard it is to make flash that long in so little time and how accurate you did it to make it not mess or anything. EXTREMELY GOOD EFFORT, Very funny, good sprite work and good animation. Do the same effort for the next one and you might just find yourself on the front page! the only advice i can give u is to keep your grammer good, its essential, trust me.

THX MAN - Evan (mariomaniac)

P.S YOU DONT HAVE TO BUT MAKE A SEQUEL!!!!

THAT WAS AWSWOME!

BY FAR that was the best I've seen in my life.graphics are cool,the story line was awsome you shood make another episode soon as possible.

you rock

i like it!!

i like it almost as much as 8 bit theater!! so r u gonna put in cecil and stuff!! cause is hecckas goodddd!!!!!!!!

01i have to say i like it

i love this im gonna be a big fan of this~!!! make more soon