Nothing fancy

It didn't seem like it would be about a gopher until the end, really. The graphics were alright, the sound affects were annoying, but to your credit it seemed like a randomly funny animation. I thought the cucumber would turn into a "holy guacamole", but you can't win them all. To be fair, this looked good, but it just had a boring idea behind it that really made it look worse than it was.

4

When I clicked on this movie, I had it in my head that this would be some sort of parody of the Talented Mr. Ripley, man I wish it was. I mean, you can really do some funny stuff with a gopher in a parody. Instead, the viewer is treated to a less than delightful romp of a bunch of vegetables, namely a tomato and cucumber who are stuck in an epic battle of wits about maintaining their battleground, all under the guise of a giant gopher watching them all along. Your artwork could use some improvements, the initial character designs are not really bad, they just need some touching up. The movements the characters make however are rather slow and do not seem as forthcoming as they could. The dialogue is shown through out-dated text bubbles, while a microphone can really make the difference. The other sound effects consist of walking/clunking and sound fine. It shows promise, good luck.

Ryan

((( NICE )))

You have very good drawing skills, i liked the way you animated the clouds and the characters were drawn very smoothly, i had to laugh at the noise the tomato made while it walked hehe, maybe next time you could try voices instead of text, but it was still very nice...

~X~

not to bad . . .

You have pretty good drawings and show some talent as an animator, but this submission had no point or humor. Also the sound was annoying. Try harder and you might add something good to newgrounds

Not that bad

It wasn't really bad; you showed potential with your artwork, it was just a not-so-great story and well, the lack of sound hurt the score.